I would write it like this:
(defmacro with-hooks ((monster method who what) &body body)
(let ((monster-var (gensym))
(method-var (gensym))
(who-var (gensym))
(what-var (gensym)))
`(let ((,monster-var ,monster) ; dummy comment
(,method-var ,method)
(,who-var ,who)
(,what-var ,what))
(add-hook ,monster-var ,method-var ,who-var ,what-var)
(unwind-protect
(progn ,@body)
(remove-hook ,monster-var ,method-var ,who-var)))))
Some notes:
something-var , monster, method, who, what ( ) .gensym , ,- unind-protect ,
remove-hook (, - - ).